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WIP 2 - Jess Photomanip by ~apolly0n:iconapolly0n:


©2004-2009 ~apolly0n
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Better? I changed the darkness around the figure a little and messed with the hair colors so it's not so BRIGHT!!11. I also blurred the birdy things, and some of the figure's lines

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:iconjo-chan:
When I saw you originally post this on lj I thought it looked really good. the sword could use something more in the way of color and definition to make it look closer to a metal. And since the light is coming from behind you. You could put more highlights in your hair to make it look brighter. Theres not much I think that could use improvement because its already wonderful.
But those are my suggestions.
:icondottiemaggie:
it's looking really good :nod: I wish I could offer some tips or sritiques..but this is so not my territory :shrug: already better then what I'd even have the patience to do, never mind the skills ;)

.maggie

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:iconmooncalfe:
i still think the birds need some work, some of them are still all pixely. you know one thing that might help? try another layer in photoshop, on top of all the others, and pick some sort of color (whichever), and fill the whole layer with it, and then change the layer mode to "Color." then play with the opacity slider until it's where you like it; the "Color" option changes everything to a monochromatic shade of whatever color you pick, but coupled with the opacity slider, it's a good way to sort of unify everything with a common color scheme. see if that helps.. that's all i can think of.

-r.
:iconlongsky:
This is perhaps the greatest thing that I have ever seen.

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